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Thursday, December 1, 2011

Essays from Ousmane Bathily - 9 th Grade


We would like to introduce you to Ousmane Bathily, one of our 9th grade students. He is interested in becoming a journalist so we asked him to write about his life to share here on the blog. The French is his own and the English is my translation with some minor changes made for flow. He would like to write more articles, so if you have any suggestions for subjects, please add them in the comments and we'll let him know. So here it is, Ousmane Bathily's first by-lines:

Maourou Diarra

Maourou Diarra est un école située dans un quartier moins riche appelé Niamakoro. Dans ce quartier les habitants sont fatigués et rencontrent des difficultés, non seulement la pauvreté, mais aussi une manque d'eau et d'électricité. Il n'y que peu de robinets que l'on ne rencontre seulement dans grandes rues. Maourou Diarra est un Cour privé. Elle est composée de petite section à 9ème année. D'après les autres classes il y a deux 9èmes, 9ème A et B, une salle d'informatique et une salle bibliothèque un projet amené par les américains pour aider les élèves à mieux parler et écrire la langue anglaise et française. Elle n'a pas un très bon entourage ni toilette et chaque classe compte plus de 45 élèves mais malgré tout les élèves débrouillent bien.

(English translation):
Maourou Diarra is a school located in a poorer neighborhood called Niamakoro. In this neighborhood, residents are weary and encounter many difficulties, not only poverty, but also a lack of water and electricity. There are only a few water taps and they can only be found in the larger streets. Maourou Diarra is a private school. It is made up of classes from kindergarten to 9th grade. After the other classes there are two 9th grades, 9th A and 9th B,  and a computer room and library brought by an American project to help the students speak and write better in French and English. It is not in a very nice area, there are no toilets and each class has more than 45 students, but in spite of all this the students manage well.


Village

Mon village s'appelle Moussala du nom de son fondateur Moussa Maniat Bathily, grand chasseur originaire de Lany Toinla. Il se situe sur la rive gauche du fleuve Sénégal à 35km de Kayes à l'ouest. Selon mes grands parents, Moussala n'a subit aucun changement toutes les formes aux temps jadis seulement de sa création à nos jours il s'est diviser en deux: et cela due au phénomène naturel érosion fluvial qui détruit plusieurs maisons. Mais aux fils années, par le courage l'honneur et la solidarité des habitants des nouvelles constructions se succédèrent à 100m de Moussala d'où le nom Moussala Moderne.

Les évènements les plus marquants sont les suivants. La bataille de Diyalla Khoslo et la succession de Moussa Maniat. Quand ElHadji Oumar répandait l'Islam lors de son passage pour le pèlerinage à la Mecque. Il négocia avec les trois frères braves guerriers de son village: Moussa Mariat Khanson d'accord pour détruire Diyalla Khaso et le soumettre à l'Islam. Ainsi Diyallo Khoslo fut capturé et soumi à l'Islam. Après cette bataille Moussa Maniat tomba gravement malade pui va mourir étant en promenade. La mort le problème de successions le posa entrainent aussi une guerre fratercide entre ces deux fils:Yougou-Siné et Séré-Sackée.

Actuellement mon village compte 4 quartiers: Bathily-Kamy, Nodi-Kany, Kamoudou-Kany et Kochén pholé. Comme aujourd'hui des trois y sont élaborées et il n'y aura pas de conflits. Chacun se montre généreux.

(English translation):
My village is called Moussala, named for its founder Moussa Maniat Bathily, a great hunter from Lany Toinla. It is located on the left bank of the Senegal River 35km west of Kayes. According to my grandparents, Moussala had not changed at all between its creation and the present except that it was divided in two and that was because of a natural phenomenon, river erosion, that destroyed several houses. But over time, through the courage, honor, and solidarity of the residents, new construction occurred 100m from Moussala, which explains the name Moussala Moderne (modern Moussala).

The most significant events for the village were the battle of Diyalla Khoslo and the succession of Moussa Maniat. When ElHadji Oumar spread Islam after his pilgirmage to Mecca he negotiated with three brothers from his village who were brave warriors. Moussa Mariat Khanson agreed to destroy Diyalla Khoslo and force it to submit to Islam. Thus Diyalla Khoslo was destroyed and converted to Islam. After this battle, Moussa Mariat fell gravely ill and died before returning home. His death created a succession conflict and led to a fratricidal war between his two sons: Yougou-Siné and Séré-Sackée.

Today, my village has 4 neighborhoods:  Bathily-Kamy, Nodi-Kany, Kamoudou-Kany et Kochén Pholé. There will be no more conflict, each is a generous place.

2 comments:

  1. Merci Maourou, Very interesting and it helps us understand what life is like for you. I look forward to hearing more, about anything that you care to write about. I'm particularly interested in what you do for fun, what you hope to do in the future, and what things you feel are most important to improve for your family, school, and village to solve current problems.

    Thank you, Baya's Dad

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  2. Here are Ousmane's responses:
    Salut père de Baya, Ça va? Et la famille ça va bien aussi? Merci à vous même.

    -Pour m'amuser il me faut d'argent et pour cela il faut que je travaille car rien facile dans la vie maintenant.

    -D'abord j'aimerais changer les rues et amener l'électricité surtout pour améliorer ma vie et celle de ma famille. Merci

    This means: Hi Baya's dad. How are you? And your family? Thank you as well.

    -To have fun I need money and to get money I need to work since nothing is easy in life.

    -First, I would change the streets and especially bring electricity to better my life and that of my family.

    Thank you.

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